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one who is touched by the sun - SN fic - R

Title: one who is touched by the sun
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun. Title from Carly Simon.
Warnings: non-con slash; possible blasphemy; future!fic
Pairings: Lucifer/Dean
Rating: R
Wordcount: 645
Point of view: third
Dedication: paper_cranesand soxykitty
Notes: thanks to my mother, now I can’t stop thinking about badly written Balrog/Gimli porn. *headdesk*
            He is a creature of sunlight, so Lucifer knows this is the perfect Hell. It is a small room, no bed and no chairs, no table and no toilet. There is no window and no door. The walls are cream, all the better to show blood, and there is only light when Lucifer allows it to shine.
            Dean Winchester looks beautiful in darkness, but beyond stunning in sunlight. It is one of the reasons Lucifer dared challenge the Creator for the boy’s soul. Creatures that shine are always the most fun to darken.
            The boy does not break. Human days pass, turning to months, and he never begs, never whimpers, never even groans. He does not ask for food or water, does not whisper for mercy. Lucifer has taken personal interest in him, something that hasn’t been done since those few moments the Son spent Below. 
            Demons line up outside the room, salivating at Lucifer’s feet, asking for the honor of hurting the boy; Lucifer denies them all.
            Eventually, the brother(BoyheirreplacementKing) will come. A reckoning will be had, and no permanent harm must be done to Dean Winchester, lovely creature that he is.
            Almost, watching the boy writhe beneath him, painting the wall with his gorgeous, sweet blood, Lucifer wishes sunlight shone in Hell, in this prison of only his own will. He has seen Dean Winchester in sunlight, when he went Above to claim him, when the weak, frail human stood strong in front of him and did not cower away. 
            Only Lucifer’s brother has ever stood before him, even as all other angels cringed back from his fury. Dean Winchester is a most impressive human.
            I hope you know what you do, Michael had whispered in the back of his mind.
            Lucifer had shot a jaunty grin to the sky and taken the boy Below, locked him away, played with him at his leisure.
            The BoyKing is coming, that child of moon and sun, the child handpicked by the Creator. Lucifer will not be able to stand in his way, once his full potential is realized. 
            Here, Below, in this realm Lucifer fashioned, he has been unchallenged for eons, for longer than even he has measure. But the end is coming, hidden behind floppy hair and a frail human body.
            Dean Winchester is strong enough to not shatter beneath all of Lucifer’s attention. His brother(BoyKing) is stronger still, with enough power to tear Hell down to the foundations. 
            I hope you know what you do, Michael had whispered, still able to love his arrogant brother after everything.
            I know exactly what I do, Lucifer thinks, unknowing if Michael can hear him through Hell, Earth, and Heaven. 
            Samuel Winchester is coming for the one thing left in existence he cares for, and his wrath will be great. His wrath will lash, not just at Lucifer and demons, but at the Creator for allowing it to happen.
            Samuel Winchester is chosen, son of light and dark, but not just by the Creator. 
            Lucifer caresses Dean Winchester’s face and the boy does not flinch, just watches him with resigned eyes.
            The boy is not broken. The boy will not break, and his brother is on the way.
            “Remember,” Lucifer murmurs into his ear, scooping a handful of blood out of his chest cavity, where it pools and overflows. “When he is here, remember why I do this.”
            Dean Winchester says nothing in response, but after all his millennia, Lucifer can read human gazes. This human is as dangerous as he ever was Above, merely biding his time.
            It will be Samuel who rips down Hell and Heaven, but Dean Winchester will destroy Lucifer, when the time finally comes.
            He will be glorious, this creature of sunlight. And Lucifer will die with the knowledge that the last victory is his, when Samuel storms Heaven and it burns.


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Jan. 22nd, 2008 02:20 am (UTC)
Holy smokes. Sensual and evocative writing, lovely imagery. Quite possibly one of your best!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
oh my god.

absolutely breathtaking.
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 02:53 am (UTC)
That was beautifully blasphemous, if I say so myself. Sam not siding with Heaven or Hell and Dean biding his time is fucking beautiful.

Holy shit, the mental image of Balrog/Gimli has officially killed whatever reproductive urge I will ever have. D:
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
Imagine your mother saying that Gimli is the Balrog's sex-slave and never gets flowers. *facepalm*

Thank you so much!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 02:54 am (UTC)
Holy frack, Batman!

The imagery is just... beyond amazing in this.
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
I love this plan by Lucifer to win even when he is destroyed. He knows our boys pretty well.
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
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Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 05:00 am (UTC)
Loved it. Loved Michael talking to Lucifer and Lucifer's admiration of Dean. Yes, those Winchester boys are tough and dangerous.
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
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Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:02 pm (UTC)
"Lucifer" just sounds more poetic, you know?

Thank you for reading!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 01:19 pm (UTC)
Holy moley, gorgeous and evocative and sensual. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks it's Lucifer who wants Dean.
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:03 pm (UTC)
Doesn't everybody want Dean?

Thank you!
(no subject) - theatervine - Jan. 23rd, 2008 02:57 am (UTC) - Expand
Jan. 22nd, 2008 01:38 pm (UTC)

Love the intensity!

Would there be more by the way??

LOL <3
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:03 pm (UTC)
More's always possible, but not very likely.

Thank you!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 03:08 pm (UTC)
Very evocative - I especially like the vivid little details of Dean's torture that leave it to the imagination to fill in- like your take on Lucifer knowing he shouldn't substantially damage Dean and that Sam really is his downfall. Thanks for a great read!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 04:47 pm (UTC)
heeheehee yay!! :D

I forgot to mention how much I loved Dean's strength in this. I've read countless dean-goes-to-hell and evil!sam fics where Satan/Azazel/whatever just BREAKS Dean down, and it's hard to read. I like to think he's stronger than that.

Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your help!
(no subject) - paper_cranes - Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:43 pm (UTC) - Expand
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Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:06 pm (UTC)
I do write longer pieces! They're just so much harder.

Thank you for reading!
Jan. 22nd, 2008 06:58 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, this is absolutely stunning.
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:06 pm (UTC)
I like that icon, but I can't tell--who is it?

Thank you for reading!
(no subject) - lady_macbeth_13 - Jan. 22nd, 2008 09:06 pm (UTC) - Expand
Jan. 22nd, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC)
Wow. Your Lucifer is messed up to an almost Winchester-like degree, and his Machiavellian little plan is deeply twisted. Excellent.
Jan. 22nd, 2008 08:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Jan. 23rd, 2008 07:32 am (UTC)
Aww thanks for the dedication darling... I'm glad you got such a good response from other people as well. (see nothing to worry about) :oD
Jan. 23rd, 2008 02:05 pm (UTC)
Jan. 23rd, 2008 12:58 pm (UTC)
Woah, creepy^^ I mean, scary... Lucifer is really quite the evil mastermind, cause he's willing to die for his plan to come true...

Jan. 23rd, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
Jan. 23rd, 2008 06:36 pm (UTC)
*stares at the screen and picks her jaw up off the floor*
that was fucking beautiful. just....beautiful....
Jan. 23rd, 2008 07:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Jan. 23rd, 2008 10:21 pm (UTC)
Oh wow there is so much scary in that last line.

And Lucifer will die with the knowledge that the last victory is his, when Samuel storms Heaven and it burns.
Jan. 23rd, 2008 10:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Jan. 24th, 2008 09:29 am (UTC)
I don't have the words to say how amazing this was. And I love that your Dean is not just a sidekick to the BoyKing, but has strength of his own.

Just - stunning.

Jan. 24th, 2008 01:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Feb. 1st, 2008 08:42 pm (UTC)


*iz incoherent*


I love this so, so much. I hope you're going to write more, because your writing is evocative, and haunting, and creates powerful images. I know I'm drooling after this tempting Lucifer, Dean has never been stronger than in this fic, and even Sam, who doesn't even appear, is however an imposing, important figure.
Feb. 1st, 2008 09:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
May. 28th, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)
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Jun. 22nd, 2008 07:56 am (UTC)
Damn!! Freaking perfection, love!

Jun. 22nd, 2008 03:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Oct. 3rd, 2008 05:50 pm (UTC)
Oct. 3rd, 2008 06:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
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Oct. 14th, 2011 06:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
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