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Smirk - SN fic - PG13 - wincest

Title: Smirk
Fandom: SN
Disclaimer: Not my characters.  Just for fun.
Warnings: AU for "Dead Man's Blood"
Pairings: wincest
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 163
Point of view: second


 

“We can have forever,” he whispers, trailing his fingers down your face. “Just say yes.”

“No,” you answer, shaking your head just a bit, not looking at him. His hands are cold on your skin and you can’t hear him breathe—a sound you’ve always known, even when he was all the way across the country.

“Sammy,” he says, pulling back and looking up into your eyes, and it’s a sin. It’s a sin he’s still so beautiful, and you hate him for it.

“You don’t call me that,” you tell him, trying to back up, to make sense of all this, and his fingers tighten on your chin. “You’re not him.”

And he smirks. NotDean fucking smirks at you, and it burns, it hurts so much, because he’s not Dean, but he is, and you just can’t do this anymore.

“Forever?” you whisper.

NotDean smiles, but you decide it doesn’t matter, because soon you’ll be NotSam and everything will feel right again.


 

Comments

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waka7
Aug. 22nd, 2006 01:48 am (UTC)
*hearts* what remains despite all else, and the moment of surrender...
(Imagining what led here and what will come is part of the delight you are giving us here...Thank you!)
tigriswolf
Aug. 22nd, 2006 01:50 am (UTC)
Thank _you_!
papered
Aug. 22nd, 2006 05:13 am (UTC)
Oh, the pain of resisting... xD

Thanks for sharing.
tigriswolf
Aug. 22nd, 2006 12:18 pm (UTC)
Thank _you_ for reading.
iamstealthyone
Aug. 22nd, 2006 04:13 pm (UTC)
NotDean smiles, but you decide it doesn’t matter, because soon you’ll be NotSam and everything will feel right again.

Ow. It's just so sad ... I know they'll be together now, but they're not supposed to be vamps. *whimpers*

Very well written and powerful.

Thanks for a good read.
tigriswolf
Aug. 22nd, 2006 09:28 pm (UTC)
But--at least they're together, right?

Thank you!
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bluesister
Aug. 22nd, 2006 08:26 pm (UTC)
Aren't you a busy thing!

Sad and the surrender at the end seems so likely.
tigriswolf
Aug. 22nd, 2006 09:34 pm (UTC)
Oh, yes, I write when I should be doing other things, and then I type instead of _also_ doing those things.

Honestly, when I could writing about the boys who needs a clean kitchen?

Thank you for reading!
anakin415
Oct. 8th, 2006 01:41 am (UTC)
I have just read them all and my god these were superb
tigriswolf
Oct. 8th, 2006 12:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
sora_chan44
Jan. 4th, 2007 05:37 am (UTC)
Wow that was fantastic. I loved it! Is it just a one shot? I would love to see more. :)
tigriswolf
Jan. 4th, 2007 07:07 am (UTC)
If you click the 'dead man's blood' tag, I have a few other ways this ep could have gone.

Thank you for reading!
crimsonsenya
Jan. 14th, 2007 10:51 pm (UTC)
This gave me the shivers!

I have to disagree with the comment above though. I don't care what Sam and Dean are, vampires, werewolves, zombies, as long as they're together. Because they're the two sides of the same coin, and nothing is sadder than them apart. /schmoop :)
tigriswolf
Jan. 14th, 2007 11:05 pm (UTC)
Dean and Sam have to be together, forever and always.

Thank you for reading!
koshweasley
Jan. 15th, 2007 03:32 am (UTC)
Smirk
Damn, this is good. Sad, but good. The last line is just perfection.

Well done!
tigriswolf
Jan. 15th, 2007 03:41 am (UTC)
Re: Smirk
Thank you for reading!

Your icon makes me giggle.
zenamydog
Jan. 20th, 2007 11:28 am (UTC)
Scarey and sweet. Yep, i think Sam would follow Dean and visa versa, anywhere and into anything!
tigriswolf
Jan. 20th, 2007 02:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
cassiakohn
Apr. 11th, 2007 05:58 am (UTC)
awwww who could say no to vampDean wanting forever? I know i couldnt
tigriswolf
Apr. 12th, 2007 12:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
gestaltrose
Sep. 20th, 2007 03:34 am (UTC)
Love this, beautiful insight on the Sam/Dean dynamic.

tigriswolf
Sep. 20th, 2007 12:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
calijirl5150
Sep. 20th, 2007 04:41 am (UTC)
NotDean smiles, but you decide it doesn’t matter, because soon you’ll be NotSam and everything will feel right again.

Perfect desciption of the boys - when they are together everything is right w/the world.
tigriswolf
Sep. 20th, 2007 12:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
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tigriswolf
Sep. 20th, 2007 05:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
nevcolleil
Sep. 20th, 2007 10:16 pm (UTC)
Oh. Wonderful. Such a short little bit, but it has everything a fic where one of the boys is vamped (and the other isn't) should.

“No,” you answer, shaking your head just a bit, not looking at him. His hands are cold on your skin and you can’t hear him breathe—a sound you’ve always known, even when he was all the way across the country.

“You don’t call me that,”


Perfect :) Great job. Thanks for posting this at vamps_win!
tigriswolf
Sep. 21st, 2007 12:49 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading! I LOVE your vamp!Winchester 'verse.
intensely_alive
Mar. 16th, 2008 08:04 am (UTC)
*sigh* so perfect.

<3
tigriswolf
Mar. 16th, 2008 01:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
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