all the rhyming. ALL THE RHYMING. every single poem so far has rhymed, for fuck’s sake. SO MUCH FORCED RHYMING.
i’m gonna finish it, if only so i can add it to my book log. (which, yes, i am keeping again. 17 so far!)
and, to be fair, there are some good lines in here. they’re just difficult to find because of all the R H Y M I N G.